the calm winds brushing against my skin like the sweet
touch of a woman's embrace the thunderous roar of the highway conflicting
calming embrace of natures love I hear the screams of the jet engines

I see the clouds dancing
around in the sky I see the ripples in the distant the
calming atmosphere of nature
the school buses engines making an annoying beat ruining the
calm atmosphere that had just
made me feel like a God.
REFLECTION
My poem is mostly about how I saw nature and how I could relate to it my theme if you didn't realize it already is about nature I talked about what I saw around me from the Birds chirping to the sounds of the planes above I used some out of the ordinary word choices for my poem such as using the word glistening, thunderous, and so on for imagery I used a generic photo of nature.
why does your poem look so plain, like the design for the wallpaper looks so dull which makes me think your poem is going to be boring
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